Friday, July 16, 2010

Lovers' cliff

lovers' cliff
a torn scarf totters
near the water's edge

Notes from the Gean
Vol. 2, Issue 1, June 2010

2 comments:

Little Seed said...

This one tells quite a story and paints quite a large picture in a tiny format. The point of haiku exactly. Very well-written.

Vic Gendrano said...

Thanks Little Seed, did you read what I wrote in the other post? Locals call this notorious promontory a suicide cliff where quite a few had been willing victims.