From the latest issue of World Haiku Review, August 2012, here's my Moving out haiku sequence.
MOVING OUT
(A haiku sequence)
by Victor P. Gendrano, USA
twilight advent
eyeing the remnants
of my past life
my daughter says
it's alright to feel sad
moving out
moving in alone
in my new retirement house
chilly Santa Ana wind
half awake
I thought I smell
her fresh brewed coffee
unfamiliar room
I bumped my head
on the bedroom's door
only a cut
the paramedic says
no stitches needed
from the window
a distant shaft
of the dawn's light
MOVING OUT
(A haiku sequence)
by Victor P. Gendrano, USA
twilight advent
eyeing the remnants
of my past life
my daughter says
it's alright to feel sad
moving out
moving in alone
in my new retirement house
chilly Santa Ana wind
half awake
I thought I smell
her fresh brewed coffee
unfamiliar room
I bumped my head
on the bedroom's door
only a cut
the paramedic says
no stitches needed
from the window
a distant shaft
of the dawn's light
